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Thursday, 8 March 2018

The crazy door in the wall

In literary I have been writing about a mini door. we looked at a picture and thought critically about it. we used lots of reflective questions to think about the picture.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jo I like your writing it looks cool and it is cool. The little door is on the big door.

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  2. Hi Jovarn, Evan here. What a cool story. I really enjoyed it, you added some great wow words like mini and wondering. There is one thing that you might want to fix and that is your text font. It was a bit hard to read.

    Evan,South Hornby School
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